Car seat brochure

Angela · May 19, 2010

Wanted to show off my finished product.

These will be used for info sessions and to attach to car seats that we sell at our consignment store. Thanks all of you that offered picture. It was a hard choice which ones to pick. They're all such cute kids.

Mae · May 19, 2010

It looks nice!

Good job and kudos!

jessi f · May 19, 2010

Very nice

murphydog77 · May 20, 2010

Good job!

ketchupqueen · May 20, 2010

It looks great! (I have one tiny quibble, but I won't nit-pick.

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violets_mommy · May 20, 2010

Looks great!

courtfrog2 · May 20, 2010

Am I silly for being excited that Stella is featured on this! LOL.

Wanna make one for me? For MI?

Angela · May 20, 2010

ketchupqueen said:
It looks great! (I have one tiny quibble, but I won't nit-pick. )

Feel free to nit-pick! I'll take any suggestions I can get.

courtfrog2 said:
Am I silly for being excited that Stella is featured on this! LOL.

Wanna make one for me? For MI?

She's such a cutie, I just couldn't resist.

Feel free to save it and use it! I'm more than happy to share.

StillThankful · May 20, 2010

Great job! Tried to give you rep but I've given too much out already within 24 hours

Congrats Courtfrog2 for getting Stella featured--she's a cutie pie

courtfrog2 · May 20, 2010

ajtastad said:
She's such a cutie, I just couldn't resist. Feel free to save it and use it! I'm more than happy to share.

She ships cheap! I'll pay half LOL.

TiaxMarie · May 20, 2010

Great job! :thumbsup:

Jennifer mom to my 7 · May 20, 2010

It looks fabulous! I think I know the nit-pick. I felt this part could use a change.

In the infant section, instead of "to preferably to age two", it should say "preferably to at least age 2", like you have in the other sections.

mish · May 20, 2010

I am super excited that Adam is on the brochure!!

violets_mommy · May 20, 2010

courtfrog2 said:
Am I silly for being excited that Stella is featured on this! LOL.

Wanna make one for me? For MI?

I'm as excited as you are because Violet made it.

ketchupqueen · May 20, 2010

Jennifer mom to my 7 said:
It looks fabulous! I think I know the nit-pick. I felt this part could use a change.

In the infant section, instead of "to preferably to age two", it should say "preferably to at least age 2", like you have in the other sections.

That's a good one, but not what I was thinking!

My quibble is with "the longer children can stay in the harness, the safer they will be." (paraphrasing)

I've seen/heard of several parents interpreting that as "I should keep my kid in the harness that is below his shoulders/she is over the weight limit of, because using it over the limit is safer than a booster." And honestly past a certain age, the original statement is not true (or at least we don't know it is), much less this misinterpretation.

I would probably say, "The longer children can ride in a properly fitted 5-point harness, the more time they have to become ready to ride in a booster." Or something. I know that wording doesn't quite sound right but... You see the problem?

Angela · May 20, 2010

Jennifer mom to my 7 said:
It looks fabulous! I think I know the nit-pick. I felt this part could use a change.

In the infant section, instead of "to preferably to age two", it should say "preferably to at least age 2", like you have in the other sections.

ketchupqueen said:
That's a good one, but not what I was thinking!

My quibble is with "the longer children can stay in the harness, the safer they will be." (paraphrasing)

I've seen/heard of several parents interpreting that as "I should keep my kid in the harness that is below his shoulders/she is over the weight limit of, because using it over the limit is safer than a booster." And honestly past a certain age, the original statement is not true (or at least we don't know it is), much less this misinterpretation.

I would probably say, "The longer children can ride in a properly fitted 5-point harness, the more time they have to become ready to ride in a booster." Or something. I know that wording doesn't quite sound right but... You see the problem?

Thanks SO much for the pointers. I will definitely make those changes. I agree with both points and see where both of you are coming from.

Thanks again!!!

Angela · May 20, 2010

mish said:
I am super excited that Adam is on the brochure!!

violets_mommy said:
I'm as excited as you are because Violet made it.

It's almost like a talent show or pageant, isn't it?

I really appreciate ALL the pictures I got! Everyone has such cute kids.

violets_mommy · May 20, 2010

ajtastad said:
It's almost like a talent show or pageant, isn't it? I really appreciate ALL the pictures I got! Everyone has such cute kids.

Yes it is!

ctbcleveland · May 20, 2010

You did a great job of being concise!

tjham · May 20, 2010

Looks great!

Here is my nit-picking. Hope you don't mind.

In the section below, the age of 6 is in both comments.
I think it should say "a child from the age of *7*..." instead of 6.
However, maybe the actual law says it that way. If so, never mind!

A child age 1-6 years old must
be secured in a child restraint
system (a safety seat or booster
seat -- NOT a seat belt).

• A child from the age of 6 up to
the age of 11 must be secured
in a child restraint system or by
a safety belt.

Also, maybe should repeat "seat belt" instead of "safety belt"

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